Tag Archives: screenwriting

Daybreakers – Broken Story Comments Off

Daybreakers: What went wrong?
Last night some friends and I went to see the new movie Daybreakers. Honestly, I’m a little sick of vampires, but I wanted to see what they did with it.
Daybreakers is the vision of the Spierig brothers. With the 1940s style costuming and vampire friendly environment you feel like you’re seeing [...]

Edward Scissorhands – still the best Christmas movie ever Comments Off

OK, so technically, it’s probably not considered a Christmas movie, but I put it in my catalog of fun things to watch around Christmas time.
Here’s the original trailer:

Here’s some making of clips about the film’s birth:

Part 2

An excellent interview with the screenwriter Caroline Thompson:
http://library.creativecow.net/articles/olague_robert/caroline_thompson.php
I couldn’t find the original script, but I did find a [...]

Patterns and character behavior based on the hero’s goal structure. 2

[It should be noted that most of this is derived from work done by Michael Hauge's Screenwriting for Hollywood]. The character types and goals are his, the patterns are something I derived. The patterns are flexible and shouldn’t be considered an exhaustive resource.
The following are the most common external goals:
EG.A) Hero’s goal is to win [...]

Brainstorming map Comments Off

This is the start of a mind map I’m working on. Its purpose is to help me make sure I’ve covered all the things I feel are important to get a complete story covered. This is a little too verbose for something like a short story, but would be ideal for a shorter novel or [...]

Screenwriting? Yep, screenwriting. 1

It’s the day before Thanksgiving. I should be getting ready to go to the day job where I’m fighting with my antique operating system to load a stupid service pack so I can get magic application development.
What have I been doing with myself lately?
Well, the novel was fail. Total fail. Why didn’t I just [...]

Great Hitchcock Quote Comments Off

This from Hitchcock by Francois Truffaut [originally found this on Mystery Man on Film's old blog]
“In many of the films now being made, there is very little cinema: they are mostly what I call ‘photographs of people talking.’ When we tell a story in cinema, we should resort to dialog only when it’s impossible to [...]